{"id":15285,"date":"2014-04-30T07:33:00","date_gmt":"2014-04-30T11:33:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/hame.ink\/hameblog\/2014\/04\/30\/the-finest-lines\/"},"modified":"2025-09-12T07:50:11","modified_gmt":"2025-09-12T10:50:11","slug":"the-finest-lines","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/hame.ink\/blether\/2014\/04\/30\/the-finest-lines\/","title":{"rendered":"The finest lines"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img decoding=\"async\" alt=\"image\" src=\"https:\/\/hame.ink\/blether\/wp-content\/uploads\/posts\/1398\/the-finest-lines02.jpg.webp\"><\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>My big challenge in trying to draw clean lines has been finding a way to get the teensy-tiny fine-line details I need yet produce the variable-width outline that features in all the comics I adore (such as <a href=\"http:\/\/www.spirou.com\/album\/spirou-et-fantasio-21.php\" title=\"Du Glucose pour Noemie\">this Spirou example<\/a> &#8212; please ignore the casual racism that seems to be a feature of Begian comics; what I like is the artwork).<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>The challenge is that I started cartooning very young, according to what I saw, so I&#8217;ve always drawn &#8220;at size&#8221;, where the received wisdom is that for commercial art you&#8217;re supposed to draw at 150% then scale it down. But I can&#8217;t do that now because all my sense of proportion and feeling is based on drawing at size.<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve tried every kind of marker, nib, and brush, trying to get the right look and feel, and this morning I finally stumbled upon a solution I love, using things I already had in my pen-roll (which I also made &#8212; <a href=\"https:\/\/www.pinterest.com\/robinaowens\/crayon-pencil-marker-paintbrush-roll-ups\/\" title=\"Paintbrush roll instructions\">here&#8217;s a bunch of sewing instructions<\/a> for these).<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" alt=\"image\" src=\"https:\/\/hame.ink\/blether\/wp-content\/uploads\/posts\/1398\/the-finest-lines12.jpg.webp\"><\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>First I &#8220;under-draw&#8221; with a mechanical pencil filled with non-reproduction blue leads.<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>Then I use a <a href=\"http:\/\/www.cultpens.com\/acatalog\/Platinum-Carbon-Pen-DP800S.html#a16686\" title=\"Platinum Carbon Desk Pen on Cult Pens\">Platinum Carbon Desk Pen<\/a> filled with <a href=\"http:\/\/www.cultpens.com\/acatalog\/Platinum-Carbon-Ink.html#a16684\" title=\"Platinum Carbon Ink on Cult Pens\">Platinum Carbon Ink<\/a> &#8212; a great combination, because the Carbon Pen is designed to never clog, despite the Carbon Ink being waterproof (which matters later when I colour my drawings with watercolour washes).<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>The Carbon Pen gives me a consistently strong fine line. Unlike all the felt-tip pens I&#8217;ve used through the years, its nib doesn&#8217;t smush no matter how hard I press. Funny, too, that this pen is cheap as chips, unlike all those expensive technical pens I&#8217;ve kept trying and hating.<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>There are only two problems with the Carbon Pen: 1) It doesn&#8217;t flex at all. This is good when I&#8217;m doing my fine detail work, but it means that my outlines look thin and weak. 2) It&#8217;s too <em>long!<\/em> Out of the box, it&#8217;s like one of those pens they have at bank counters on a chain with the vast cigarette-holder end. So I sawed mine off.<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>The Carbon Pen is in the middle here:<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" alt=\"image\" src=\"https:\/\/hame.ink\/blether\/wp-content\/uploads\/posts\/1398\/the-finest-lines22.jpg.webp\"><\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>What I would normally do next is go back over the outside lines with my regular writing pen (the very pocketable <a href=\"http:\/\/www.cultpens.com\/acatalog\/Kaweco-Liliput-Pens.html\" title=\"Kaweco Lilliput on Cult Pens\">Kaweco Lilliput<\/a> with a better nib from a <a href=\"http:\/\/www.cultpens.com\/acatalog\/Tombow_Object_Fountain_Pen.html\" title=\"Tombow Object on Cult Pens\">Tombow pen<\/a> in it). This gives the characters more weight and makes them pop out from the background (on the rare occasion that I actually draw a background).<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>The problem with this, though, is that the line is &#8212; well, in Zen they talk about &#8220;first thoughts&#8221;, those fresh insights we have that we then quickly cover over with our socialised, conditioned, more acceptable responses. It&#8217;s like that with lines: the first line you draw has life and flow and intention to it; the second is <em>tracing<\/em>. It&#8217;s wiggly, it&#8217;s hesitant, and &#8212; horrors! &#8212; it can deviate from the first line, creating little gaps between them, as you can see in this drawing:<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" alt=\"image\" src=\"https:\/\/hame.ink\/blether\/wp-content\/uploads\/posts\/1398\/the-finest-lines32.jpg.webp\"><\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>The two other pens above are ones I bought recently from <a href=\"http:\/\/www.fountainpenrevolution.com\/fpr_collection.html#dilli\" title=\"Fountain Pen Revolution\">Fountain Pen Revolution<\/a>, a manufacturer in India. The Dilli is on the top, and with my order they sent me the Serwex (on the bottom) for free!<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;d read about the Dilli on <a href=\"http:\/\/www.thingsbydan.co.uk\/2014\/03\/pens-pens-pens\/\" title=\"Things by Dan\">another cartoonist&#8217;s blog<\/a>, but its flex nib was too heavy for fine details (like eyes), so I put it aside, using it just to hand-written letters (because it gives cursive writing a lovely Spencerian thick-and-thin character). The Serwex, though &#8212; the <em>free<\/em> one! &#8212; proved to be my favourite pen for lettering comics.<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>(I also have a medium <a href=\"http:\/\/www.cultpens.com\/acatalog\/Lamy-vista-fountain-pen.html#a9880\" title=\"Lamy Vista on Cult Pens\">Lamy Vista<\/a> for bold letters and a broad <a href=\"http:\/\/www.cultpens.com\/acatalog\/Lamy-nexx.html#a11664\" title=\"Lamy Nexx on Cult Pens\">Lamy Nexx<\/a> for really big letters, as well as a brush pen filled with Carbon ink for doing large, wiggly features like panel borders.)<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>What occurred to me this morning was to just do the fine details with the Carbon pen but leave the outlines alone, then do them with the Dilli&#8217;s flex nib.<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>[*Cue <em>Hallelujah Chorus<\/em>*]<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>If you look again at the first drawing, you can see (I think) how much cleaner and clearer the outlines are. I&#8217;ve been under-drawing anyway since my passion for cartooning has rekindled this past year (and gosh, does under-drawing improve the integrity of a figure), so with that guideline in place, it really doesn&#8217;t matter at what point I do the outlines.<\/p>\n<\/p>\n<p>So there you have it. If you persisted through all this, you&#8217;re either a drawing implement geek like me, or else a very patient person. Thank you!<\/p><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>My big challenge in trying to draw clean lines has been finding a way to get the teensy-tiny fine-line details I need yet produce the variable-width outline that features in all the comics I adore (such as this Spirou example &#8212; please ignore the casual racism that seems to be a feature of Begian comics; [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-15285","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/hame.ink\/blether\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/15285","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/hame.ink\/blether\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/hame.ink\/blether\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/hame.ink\/blether\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/hame.ink\/blether\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=15285"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/hame.ink\/blether\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/15285\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/hame.ink\/blether\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=15285"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/hame.ink\/blether\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=15285"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/hame.ink\/blether\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=15285"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}